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Hey two poems from writing 1 class

Hi Jordyn... How have you been? I'm not back yet but break is coming soon... Yay!! For now I'm mostly posting assignments.

 

Wakeful Being

 

 

 Like Bathing in Candlelight

 

Swimming in the lull of warm

 

Sensation of beating, flowing, falling

 

 Ripples at the navel

 

Like the butterflies

 

 So overt and sinful

 

While church bells sing

  

 

No is subtle

 

No is safe

 

No is real

 

But yes courses through the running water

 

And bounces off the porcelain tiles

 

Glowing as the fire sublimes

 

In the fervor of my senses

 

In the hems of the fabric

 

In the secrets

 

And in the undertones

 

 

It’s true that sometimes

 

The desire never comes

 

And to the literal

 

We fall prisoner 

 

In the abstraction of disappointment

 

Until clarity conforms like water

 

Church bells ring outside our psyche

 

And security sings from the outside in

 

Was it the departure you thought you wanted?

 

That shivers outside the womb

 

Or was it the fervor, the wakeful being

 

That lives between the tiles

 

And glows beneath the grout

 

  Nostalgia 

 

Across the Street and then across the street again

 

The man with the mustache sold snow cones

 

That would leak sticky purple before I could finish

 

I learned what a yellow Jacket was

 

 

And that bumble bees don’t sting

 

When tag birthed my competitive spirit

 

The cement bleachers were like big stairs

 

Concrete grounds for amusement

 

 

 The basket ball courts were grounds for breeding

 

The orgy of 98 he later told me

 

He didn’t know I was eight back then

 

But I remember him

 

When I was little and I would watch the big kids play

 

And when I was older and they were older still

 

Until one day “Big” became relative

 

Because I thought to myself

 

 

“If I am still little we must all still be little to someone.”

 

But we didn’t know it then

 

Or at least I didn’t

 

I didn’t know my fear was envy

 

Or that my envy was fear

 

But every time I sat there on the concrete bleachers

 

I would remember my lopsided training wheels

 

Designed to teach balance

 

And prepare me for the two-wheeler

 

I still haven’t learned to ride

 

Comments

 

jordynt said:

Awe! I love love love the second one. Don't really understand the first one, I admit (and now you're making me want to post some poems of my own but they're all practically transparent and anyone who knows me could know who they're about), but the second one... wow.

Beautyful. :)

February 28, 2008 9:23 PM
 

jordynt said:

& yes I am aware I misspelled beautiful. It was on purpose, no worries. ;)

February 28, 2008 9:23 PM